<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/" xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" version="2.0" xmlns:itunes="http://www.itunes.com/dtds/podcast-1.0.dtd" xmlns:googleplay="http://www.google.com/schemas/play-podcasts/1.0"><channel><title><![CDATA[Incomplete Sentences]]></title><description><![CDATA[A year-long storytelling initiative by The Millbrook Companies and Lone Star Justice Alliance exploring the lives and transformation of people serving long prison sentences for crimes committed as minors. ]]></description><link>https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com</link><image><url>https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!8vgp!,w_256,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Ff781d3a9-b0f7-49b5-8b4f-8f1be6bc594f_1280x1280.png</url><title>Incomplete Sentences</title><link>https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com</link></image><generator>Substack</generator><lastBuildDate>Sun, 26 Jul 2026 19:21:45 GMT</lastBuildDate><atom:link href="https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/feed" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml"/><copyright><![CDATA[Incomplete Sentences]]></copyright><language><![CDATA[en]]></language><webMaster><![CDATA[ourincompletesentences@substack.com]]></webMaster><itunes:owner><itunes:email><![CDATA[ourincompletesentences@substack.com]]></itunes:email><itunes:name><![CDATA[Incomplete Sentences]]></itunes:name></itunes:owner><itunes:author><![CDATA[Incomplete Sentences]]></itunes:author><googleplay:owner><![CDATA[ourincompletesentences@substack.com]]></googleplay:owner><googleplay:email><![CDATA[ourincompletesentences@substack.com]]></googleplay:email><googleplay:author><![CDATA[Incomplete Sentences]]></googleplay:author><itunes:block><![CDATA[Yes]]></itunes:block><item><title><![CDATA[A Voice That Was Always There]]></title><description><![CDATA[On Lici Carmichael's poetry, the practice of writing as advocacy, and what it means to document your own life.]]></description><link>https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/p/a-voice-that-was-always-there</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/p/a-voice-that-was-always-there</guid><pubDate>Fri, 24 Jul 2026 14:55:16 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!8vgp!,w_256,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Ff781d3a9-b0f7-49b5-8b4f-8f1be6bc594f_1280x1280.png" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span>There is a line in one of Lici Carmichael&#8217;s poems that functions less like a line in a poem and more like a statement of purpose: </span><em><span>My writing is my voice.</span></em></p><p><span>It would be easy to read this as metaphor &#8212; the kind of thing that shows up in mission statements and motivational content. But Lici means it as description, and the distinction matters. Writing, for her, is the mechanism by which her voice actually moves. It is the form in which what she observes and experiences and believes can travel beyond the room she is in, reach people she will never meet, and survive the conditions that would otherwise contain it.</span></p><div class="subscription-widget-wrap-editor" data-attrs="{&quot;url&quot;:&quot;https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/subscribe?&quot;,&quot;text&quot;:&quot;Subscribe&quot;,&quot;language&quot;:&quot;en&quot;}" data-component-name="SubscribeWidgetToDOM"><div class="subscription-widget show-subscribe"><div class="preamble"><p class="cta-caption">Thanks for reading! Subscribe for free to receive new posts and support my work.</p></div><form class="subscription-widget-subscribe"><input type="email" class="email-input" name="email" placeholder="Type your email&#8230;" tabindex="-1"><input type="submit" class="button primary" value="Subscribe"><div class="fake-input-wrapper"><div class="fake-input"></div><div class="fake-button"></div></div></form></div></div><p><span>She has been building that mechanism for years. The poems and essays that now form part of the </span><em><span>Incomplete Sentences </span></em><span>campaign editorial canon did not arrive in a burst of inspired productivity. They are the accumulated output of a sustained practice &#8212; a choice, made repeatedly, to document rather than disappear.</span></p><p><strong><span data-color="#ffd900" style="color: rgb(255, 217, 0);">The reporter&#8217;s eye</span></strong></p><p><span>The nickname people reach for when they describe Lici &#8212; </span><em><span>the little reporter</span></em><span> &#8212; is accurate in the ways that good nicknames are. A reporter&#8217;s job is to observe carefully, find the language that makes the observation communicable, and get it into a form that survives transmission.</span></p><p><span>Lici does all three. Her poems are not impressionistic. They are specific. They name things directly. They do not soften observation into sentiment or harden it into argument. They hold the thing itself, in language precise enough that the reader can actually see it.</span></p><p><span>This is a harder skill than it looks. Most writing either reaches for the universal too quickly, losing the specific detail that makes a story real, or stays so close to the particular that it fails to connect to anything beyond itself. Lici&#8217;s work moves between these registers with a confidence that comes from genuine attention &#8212; the attention of someone who has spent years watching carefully and learning to trust what the watching yields.</span></p><p><strong><span data-color="#ffd900" style="color: rgb(255, 217, 0);">Color as record</span></strong></p><p><span>Pay attention to color across Lici&#8217;s body of work and something becomes visible. Red appears early &#8212; not as symbol but as accurate description of a particular quality of experience. Gold comes later, and it is not a metaphor for things getting better in some vague, consoling sense. It is a description of a specific process: pressure applied over time to something that refuses to give way.</span></p><p><em><span>Gold is forged in fire,</span></em><span> she writes in one poem. The line carries weight because it is not asking for sympathy. It is reporting a fact about metallurgy and, simultaneously, about what she has learned of her own nature. The fire is not invoked to make the gold more impressive. It is named because it is true, and because leaving it out would make the record incomplete.</span></p><p><span>This is what distinguishes Lici&#8217;s writing from writing that performs transformation for an audience: she is not staging a narrative arc. She is documenting an ongoing process from the inside, in real time, with the accuracy of someone who has no use for a version of events that is cleaner than the actual thing.</span></p><p><strong><span data-color="#ffd900" style="color: rgb(255, 217, 0);">Writing as advocacy</span></strong></p><p><span>One of the phrases Lici uses to describe her work is </span><em><span>standing in the gap for forgotten children.</span></em><span> It is not a rhetorical flourish. It is a practical description of what her writing does: it creates a record of experiences and circumstances that are systematically excluded from public understanding.</span></p><p><span>When she writes about young people whose situations have been misread or ignored by the systems designed to help them, she is not writing abstractly about a demographic. She is writing from proximity, from relationship, from the kind of knowledge that only comes from direct involvement in a community rather than studying it from outside</span></p><p><span>This is why the campaign&#8217;s decision to lead with her voice &#8212; rather than with expert analysis or advocacy language &#8212; is the right one. The expert analysis can explain what the neuroscience says about adolescent development. It can walk through how sentencing policy has changed or failed to change. What it cannot do is be Lici, who has lived inside the questions the analysis is trying to answer and who has found language for that experience that no secondary source could produce.</span></p><p><strong><span data-color="#ffd900" style="color: rgb(255, 217, 0);">What the poems ask</span></strong></p><p><span>In the poem where Lici describes her writing as a weapon, she includes a line that is, in a quiet way, the most generous thing she could have written: </span><em><span>To read this is your choice.</span></em></p><p><span>She is acknowledging the asymmetry. She has written. Whether it is received is not fully in her control. She is not demanding an audience or claiming one she has not earned. She is making the work available and noting, without resentment, that the availability of something and the willingness to receive it are two different conditions.</span></p><p><span>The campaign is working on that second condition &#8212; building the infrastructure, the reach, the context that brings more readers to the work that has been waiting for them.</span></p><p><span>The poems have been there. The voice has always been there. What </span><em><span>Incomplete Sentences</span></em><span> is building is the room for more people to finally walk in and hear it.</span></p><p><em><span>Lici Carmichael&#8217;s poetry and essays are available at </span><a href="http://www.incompletesentences.org"><span data-color="#ffd900" style="color: rgb(255, 217, 0);">incompletesentences.org</span></a><span> as part of the Incomplete Sentences campaign, a year-long initiative by the Millbrook Companies and the Lone Star Justice Alliance. Follow the Substack for ongoing essays, stories, and reflections through 2026. Support LSJA&#8217;s work through the campaign site.</span></em></p><div class="subscription-widget-wrap-editor" data-attrs="{&quot;url&quot;:&quot;https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/subscribe?&quot;,&quot;text&quot;:&quot;Subscribe&quot;,&quot;language&quot;:&quot;en&quot;}" data-component-name="SubscribeWidgetToDOM"><div class="subscription-widget show-subscribe"><div class="preamble"><p class="cta-caption">Thanks for reading! Subscribe for free to receive new posts and support my work.</p></div><form class="subscription-widget-subscribe"><input type="email" class="email-input" name="email" placeholder="Type your email&#8230;" tabindex="-1"><input type="submit" class="button primary" value="Subscribe"><div class="fake-input-wrapper"><div class="fake-input"></div><div class="fake-button"></div></div></form></div></div>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[The Little Reporter]]></title><description><![CDATA[Delicia &#8220;Lici&#8221; Carmichael has always had something to say. The question was whether anyone would make room to hear it.]]></description><link>https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/p/the-little-reporter</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/p/the-little-reporter</guid><pubDate>Thu, 09 Jul 2026 22:38:41 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!8vgp!,w_256,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Ff781d3a9-b0f7-49b5-8b4f-8f1be6bc594f_1280x1280.png" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span>There is a phrase that keeps appearing when people talk about Delicia Carmichael &#8212; people who have read her writing, people who have listened to her, people who have had the chance to sit with her work long enough to understand what she is doing. They call her </span><em><span>the little reporter.</span></em></p><p><span>Not a case number. Not a file. A reporter.</span></p><p><span>The nickname is an act of recognition. It names what Lici actually does: she watches, she listens, she finds language for things other people haven&#8217;t yet been able to name, and she writes it down. She has been doing this for years, including during her time in a Texas prison, producing poetry and essays and advocacy writing that circulates now far beyond any single facility or system.</span></p><p><span>She is the first featured voice in </span><em><span>Incomplete Sentences,</span></em><span> a year-long campaign launched in March 2026 by the Millbrook Companies and the Lone Star Justice Alliance. The campaign exists to surface stories that the public has not yet fully received. Lici&#8217;s is the first &#8212; not because her situation is the most extreme, but because she is ready to tell it, has always been ready to tell it, and has been building the language to do so for years.</span></p><div><hr></div><p><strong><span>What the writing is for</span></strong></p><p><span>In one of her poems, Lici writes: </span><em><span>My writing is my voice. When I speak I&#8217;m not heard. To read this is your choice. It&#8217;s nothing forced. I&#8217;ve been shut down and silenced my whole life. Now I will use my voice to fight.</span></em></p><p><span>The second line matters: </span><em><span>To read this is your choice.</span></em><span> She is not demanding. She is offering &#8212; and noting, without bitterness, that the offer has not always been taken up. She has written that her writing is her weapon. The word is specific. It implies an adversary, and the adversary she is fighting is not any single person but a condition: the condition of being unseen, of having your full story never reach the people who might receive it.</span></p><p><span>She has been fighting that condition her entire life, and she is still winning.</span></p><div><hr></div><p><strong><span>Red and gold</span></strong></p><p><span>Pay attention to color in Lici&#8217;s work and something comes into focus. Red appears early &#8212; the color of her earliest writing, of the years that were hardest, of survival-mode. It is not a dramatic gesture. It is accurate.</span></p><p><span>Gold comes later. Gold is harder to summarize quickly, and Lici doesn&#8217;t try to. It is the color of what she is becoming &#8212; of the commitment she has made to growth, to advocacy, to standing in the gap for people whose stories have not yet found a listener. There is a poem that traces the process: </span><em><span>Gold is forged in fire.</span></em><span> She is describing a specific, ongoing transformation. The fire is real. So is the gold.</span></p><p><span>Her writing carries this arc not as narrative convenience but as lived record. She is not constructing a redemption story for an audience. She is documenting something that is actually happening, and has been happening, with or without anyone watching.</span></p><div><hr></div><p><strong><span>Standing in the gap</span></strong></p><p><span>One of the phrases Lici uses to describe her advocacy work is this: </span><em><span>standing in the gap for forgotten children.</span></em><span> It is a precise description of what she does and has done &#8212; using her voice to hold space for young people whose circumstances have not been understood or named by the systems that shape their lives.</span></p><p><span>The phrase is also a window into how she understands herself. Not as someone acted upon by a system. Not as a cautionary tale. As someone with a purpose, a practice, and a commitment that predates the campaign and will outlast it.</span></p><p><span>She has become a mentor and advocate for young people, including those she worked with inside the prison, who have less access to language. A writer whose work now reaches readers who have never been near a courtroom but who find themselves changed by what she has put on the page.</span></p><p><span>This is not in spite of the years she has spent inside the system. It is, in some ways, because of them &#8212; because she chose to use that time to deepen rather than diminish, to build rather than wait.</span></p><div><hr></div><p><strong><span>What the campaign is offering</span></strong></p><p><em><span>Incomplete Sentences</span></em><span> is built around a simple, serious idea: that the public record of a person&#8217;s life is almost always incomplete, and that incompleteness has costs &#8212; for the individual, and for everyone who forms opinions and makes decisions based on the compressed version.</span></p><p><span>Lici&#8217;s story is the first case study in that argument, and it is a good one &#8212; not because it is extreme, but because it is specific. There is no generalization required. There is a person. She has a voice. She has been using it for years. The campaign is extending the reach of that voice to readers who have not yet had the chance to encounter it.</span></p><p><span>Three more stories will follow through 2026, one per quarter. Each will belong to someone whose full narrative extends well beyond what any single document about them has captured. Each will be told in the person&#8217;s own words, supplemented by context that makes those words legible.</span></p><p><span>Lici&#8217;s work &#8212; her poems, her essays, her advocacy writing &#8212; is available now at incompletesentences.org. The little reporter has been filing dispatches for years. They are ready to be read.</span></p><div><hr></div><p><em><span>Incomplete Sentences is a year-long initiative by the Millbrook Companies and the Lone Star Justice Alliance. Read Lici&#8217;s story and the campaign&#8217;s full educational archive at incompletesentences.org. Support LSJA&#8217;s advocacy work through the campaign site.</span></em></p>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[What happens when a life is reduced to a single sentence?]]></title><description><![CDATA[In the coming months, we will publish a series of stories that ask this simple question]]></description><link>https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/p/what-happens-when-a-life-is-reduced</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/p/what-happens-when-a-life-is-reduced</guid><pubDate>Tue, 17 Mar 2026 20:55:11 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!prhY!,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fc9676744-8ac4-4906-92ec-de54a9765a3a_1080x1080.png" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class="captioned-image-container"><figure><a class="image-link image2 is-viewable-img" target="_blank" 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Each quarter, we will feature the story of a person currently serving a long prison sentence for actions committed when they were young.</p><h4>These stories are not meant to excuse harm. They are meant to restore context.</h4><p>Because a legal sentence captures a verdict, not a life.</p><p>The first story will be published soon.</p><p class="button-wrapper" data-attrs="{&quot;url&quot;:&quot;https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/subscribe?&quot;,&quot;text&quot;:&quot;Subscribe now&quot;,&quot;action&quot;:null,&quot;class&quot;:null}" data-component-name="ButtonCreateButton"><a class="button primary" href="https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/subscribe?"><span>Subscribe now</span></a></p><p></p><div><hr></div><div class="subscription-widget-wrap-editor" data-attrs="{&quot;url&quot;:&quot;https://ourincompletesentences.substack.com/subscribe?&quot;,&quot;text&quot;:&quot;Subscribe&quot;,&quot;language&quot;:&quot;en&quot;}" data-component-name="SubscribeWidgetToDOM"><div class="subscription-widget show-subscribe"><div class="preamble"><p class="cta-caption">Thanks for reading Incomplete Sentences! 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